1) INTRODUCE THE DRAWING IN GENERAL TERMS
•What is the title of the drawing?
“
States of mind, those who go”
•What is the name of the artist?
Umberto Boccioni
•What is the year the drawing was done?
In 1911
•What is the medium?
The
medium is oil on canvas
•What is the subject matter or general theme of the work?
It is a drawing about the mind of artist.
•Does the drawing have a particular purpose?
The drawing aims at express
the feeling and mind of the artist. It is a scene of the train station. We can
see that it is a mix scene with train station, passengers and smoke. However,
it is not simply a sketch. The artist draws it in an abstract way.
2) DESCRIBE THE DRAWING IN DETAIL
2) DESCRIBE THE DRAWING IN DETAIL
The drawing is full of curved
lines. Although they are in a same direction, it is cross and produce a feeling
of confusion and messy. It is quite clearly that the lines are drawn from the
right to the left with power and energy. It invokes the sense of motion. It
releases strong feeling of stressful.
The tone of the drawing is
dark and murky. It is mainly black, grey and brown in colour. There is all cold
colour. It makes people feel depress and stressful. You cannot feel any
happiness. And this reflects the mind of the artist is so down. He just want to
express and release his messy, confuse and stressful mind though
In the drawing, the artist
uses geometric shapes to implicate the train station and the smoke. There also
are some figure through the smoke which is in cylinder and triangular shapes. As
all the things is not in their original shape, it gives a weird feeling.
The texture of the drawing is
crude. It is not in a smooth and delicate way. For the composition, it is
mainly some smoke hide the train station and the passengers. Through the smoke,
we can see the human figure and the station. They are all in geometric shape. Therefore,
it makes us feel firm although it is not very clear. Besides, the platform of the
train station is not showed, but we can still feel it. Everything is frozen in
a motion state. The time is frozen, people is frozen and the station is also
frozen. Every motion is hold and you can therefore feel the energy, the power
and the state of artist’s mind.
The rhythm is very important in this drawing as the train, the human and
the smoke are all in rush rhythm. You therefore can feel the stress and
confusion of the mind of the artist and experience the excitement of the artist
through his vision.
It is quite a strong contrast in the upper and the lower part of the
drawing. We can quite clearly see the face of the passengers while the platform
is not allowed to see. It is hided under the smoke and the curved lines.The drawing is not harmonious and it somehow
quite conflicting. It is because everything is not stable in the drawing. The passengers
are not stably sit in their seats. It seems that they are nearly crashed
outside the seats.
3) INTERPRETATION AND EVALUATION
It is a hard mood in this drawing, as the tone of the painting is dark
and gloomy. Lines are heavy, thick and cross. The figures concentrate in the
upper part of the drawing. All these things provoke depressed feeling. however,
it is a thought-provoking drawing. After you see this drawing, you will feel a
little bit heavy. You will think that life is not so easy and simple. There will
not be no change or challenge in your life. Sometimes, you may feel confuse or
stress of what you are facing. Peace of your mind is not always can exist as
everything is keep moving including your mind just like the drawing. Therefore,
I think it is an excellent drawing.
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Hi, I am Lily
ReplyDeleteI agree that the rhythm in this picture is important to convey the mood. It really makes people confused and want to find what objects are exactly in the picture.
Hoi Ling,
ReplyDeleteI think your visual analysis is good. I also think that this drawing is so dark. We can feel the depress and stressful is here because of the smoke and messy line here. We can find the different face in the messy background. It is quite terrible.
Bobo
Easy: This picture look messy and I look at this picture for a while then I find buildings and people in the picture. You said about the rhythm and I think I like your comment that it was a rush rhythm. Audience can really feel the stress of the artist and the bad mood of this picture.
ReplyDeleteJoyce Li:
ReplyDeleteHi Hoiling,
i agree that the drawing reflected a sense of stressful rhythm is dominating the drawing. I also liked the drawing it is so expressive and seems to express anger.
It also makes me think of wind. The drawing is just simply expressive and nice.
Ryan:
ReplyDeleteI think your analysis is good and I think this drawing is so messy that we can feel there are some people and buildings in a strong windstorm. So we can feel some stressful and depressed feeling from the picture. I think the expression of the picture is good.
Carol: Ling, your analysis is good but be sure in future work to spell things out in as much detail as you can, and be sure you back up all claims or opinions using those details. Avoid opinions that are not well supported. Excellent feedback on others' work. Well done.
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