Moore From letter to Horner 1923
Chloe Ho
In this drawing, there are curve lines, horizontal lines, vertical
lines, some are thick and most of it is thin. It is clear as it was drawn by
ink pen. Line is very functional in this drawing, which creating different
texture of the objects.
Both of linear perspective and aerial perspective are used in the
drawing. As mentioned in the part of line. There is an aerial perspective is
presenting a sense of distance. The no.5 rectangle, the artist used horizontal
line to depict the sea level. The bottom of this rectangle lines are denser. By
contrast, lines in middle part are sparser. It creates an aerial perspective of
the distance and the space is expanded. The farther area is always unclear for
sight, thus, the artist used sparser lines, vice versa.
1) INTRODUCE THE DRAWING IN GENERAL TERMS
What is the title of the
drawing?
The title of the drawing is "Letter to Horner".
What is the name of the
artist?
The artist's name is Moore.
What is the year the
drawing was done?
The drawing is done in 1923.
What is the medium? (ie
the materials used to produce the picture, for example charcoal on paper, pen
and ink etc)
The artist used ink pen and ink to produce in paper.
What is the subject matter
or general theme of the work? (eg is it a figure drawing, a map, a portrait, an
autobiographical work, a picture about nature, a drawing of the city etc?)
This is a picture about Norway's fiord. It looks like a story
through a comic style.
Does the drawing have a
particular purpose? eg Is it a diagram that explains how something works?
Yes, it does. In fact, it is a letter from the artist to his friend.
Does it record accurately
record the appearance of something?
Properly. The drawing records the view of the fiord in Norway.
Does it express the
artist's emotion or memory?
Yes, it does express the memory of the artist. As we can see, a team
is climbing the fiord. The artist is depicting his experience when climbing the
fiord in Norway.
2) DESCRIBE THE DRAWING IN DETAIL
How is line used? What
does it do/express?
In this drawing, there are curve lines, horizontal lines, vertical
lines, some are thick and most of it is thin. It is clear as it was drawn by
ink pen. Line is very functional in this drawing, which creating different
texture of the objects.
First, the thick lines used to divide the space into several rectangles
with different sizes. Most of the thick lines are drawn straightly, so it creates
a tidy composition of the drawing because every subject is boxed and organized.
It makes each rectangle works independently with the content.
As believe it is a quick sketch within a letter, thus, the line is
the main character and simply used to contour the objects. For example, the
tree, the road, the cloud, the house. All of it is drawn in a rush temple
without any modeling or shading.
Besides, the artist also used different density of lines helps to
create the sense of three-dimension and the perspective of distance. For
example, no.3, the thin rectangle, it depicts mountains, rocks, bridge and
three people. The contour of rocks and mountains were outlined by lines
clearly. The shadow was created by the dense lines; most of it is parallel to a
direction, also highly concentrated in a part of area. There will be a contrast
with the blank area to stick out the shadow part of the rocks, making it more
three-dimensional.
On the other hand, the no.5 rectangle, the artist used horizontal
line to depict the sea level. In the bottom of this rectangle, the lines are
denser. By contrast, the lines in middle part are sparser. It creates an aerial
perspective of the distance that depicts a sense from the near to the far.
How is tone used? What
does it do/express?
The drawing is monochrome therefore the color tone is quite neutral
and unity by using ink pen and ink.
In the no.2, the sky was filled with a plate of spreading out ink. There
are a few layers of the ink, thus, parts of it are darker, and it makes a
gradual change of the tone.
It displays a huge contrast with surrounded area because of a single
color tone. The advantage of it is easy to present the main object of the
drawing. For instance, the no.8 rectangle, this small box was nearly filled
with black; the rest area (the figure) is very outstanding and presentable.
What can you say about
shape and/or form in this picture? What is the effect?
At mentioned above, the rectangles in this drawing are very obvious.
It boxed all the things inside and started telling story. The size of the
rectangle is intentionally designed to present the objects’ main
characteristics. For example, the no.4 is very narrow but the height is quite
tall. Referring to the object (the crag), it’s very suitable and proper to
having the shape of that rectangle.
Is texture a feature of
the drawing?
In my view, texture is not the main feature of the drawing. However,
parts of the texture are drawn well. For instance, the artist used lines and
spreading out ink to make the texture of the rock is very rough, craggy and
rocky.
What can you say about the
composition of the drawing? What is the effect of this type of composition on
the overall drawing?
The composition of the drawing is very tidy, unity and well
organized with several rectangles. The space was cut into various parts and orders
it accordingly, in order to depict a story. The order guides the viewer and it
is easy to understand what the storyline is about.
Is rhythm important in
this picture? If so, say more about it...
The rhythm is quite important in this picture because the order of
the boxes have already given a stable temple to the views. They follow the
order and discover what experience the artist is sharing.
Is the picture balanced?
Explain...
I think the drawing is balanced. Most of the areas in the paper are
filled and the uses of line and tone make it fair on each area. None of the
area looks heavier than others.. As written on the paper, the aim of drawing no.9
is “just to fill up the page”, the artist had an excellent perception of
composition. He knew well the drawing would be unbalanced if there is no no.9.
Therefore, the composition is now completely balanced with tidy rectangles.
Is perspective used in the
picture? If so, describe the way that the illusion of three-dimensional space
has been created.
Both of linear perspective and aerial perspective are used in the
drawing. As mentioned in the part of line. There is an aerial perspective is
presenting a sense of distance. The no.5 rectangle, the artist used horizontal
line to depict the sea level. The bottom of this rectangle lines are denser. By
contrast, lines in middle part are sparser. It creates an aerial perspective of
the distance and the space is expanded. The farther area is always unclear for
sight, thus, the artist used sparser lines, vice versa.
On the other hand, there is a linear perspective in no.9. As the
picture I showed, lines are going to a same direction. Objects are smaller and
smaller that creates the three-dimensional space from the near to the far.
Is the picture harmonious?
If so, in what way?
In terms of composition, the uses of line and tone and slight
contrast, I think the drawing is harmonious. The composition is well balanced.
And the use of line and tone work with coordination. In combine with these
elements, the picture is visually harmonious.
Are there any strong
contrasts in the picture? Say more...
There is a strong contrast in the drawing. For instance, the no.8
rectangle, this small box was nearly filled with black; the rest area (the
figure) is very outstanding and presentable.
3) INTERPRETATION AND EVALUATION
What is the mood of the
drawing? Justify your answer using information from your responses above.
In my opinion, the mood of drawing itself is harmonious because of
the balanced composition, the use of gentle tone and the capture of nature in Norway.
Besides, I believed the drawing also carry a joyful mood due to the
story the drawing was told. The experience of hiking in the Norway fiord, the
artist shared how excited and successful he was when he arrived the 1000ft Norwegian
village by himself.
What does the drawing
express? Justify your answer using information from your responses above.
The drawing is full of artist’s emotions and memories. He went to
the fiord in Norway with friends, trying to visit the Norwegian village. Defeating
the obstructs likes crossing the river, climbing the rocks, passing the bridge,
descent of fiord, he arrived the 1000ft Norwegian village finally. I can see
how the artist is excited to share his experience to his friend. Also, this drawing
recorded his journey and captured the nature of Norway.
In your opinion, why is
this work interesting/moving/clever/ imaginative/thought-provoking/......? Choose the adjective(s) that best fit(s) the
work, and then justify your conclusions by referring to specific features and
qualities of the drawing (including those you have discussed above).
If to choose an adjective that best fit the work, I would like to
pick “interesting”. That’s because the drawing is really interesting. The
artist used a drawing depicting his experience in Norway fiord rather than used
verbal description. What I impressed most is the composition that the artist
made. Each box could be an independently work, at the same time it works with
others well. The story is recorded clearly and completely.





MingMing:
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe! I think you have done a precise and in-depth analysis. You described the lines, perspective, tone in detail, and therefore your analysis does enhance my understanding on this drawing. Also, I appreciate your effort in adding some pictures to make your analysis precise and clear.
C.Ting:
ReplyDeleteChloe, you have done a detailed analysis on above drawing. Good job. I like the way you use the red marks to outline the important part that you try to analyse. It is clear and more easy to understand the drawing with the guidance of red marks. It seems you have put a great effort on it. Besides, I think the drawing looks like a comics layout because of the arrangement of different size of grids. The overall composition is balanced and stable. For the drawing style, the artist use lines and the method of etching to construct the picture. By saying the use of line, you have give some example to support your statement. It is good and convincing.
Many:
ReplyDeleteHi, Chole, you did a great job! i see you work very hard on analyzing it and you point out something really detail. before, i don't think it is a beautiful art work. But after reading your analysis, i found that it is really interesting. i think you can also talk about the 3-D element in this picture. For example, in the box no.7, some trees are bigger show they are closer to the reader while some cottages and trees are smaller, which means they are further from us.
Charles:
ReplyDeleteIt is very great that you have done such great analysis of the painting. To be honest, when I first saw this painting. I cannot understand very well. I think that your observation in the painting is quite success. You can observe the minor detail like the texture of the rock and the perspective that found in the small part of the picture. Moreover, you did a great job on illustrating these observation to us! Thank you!
This is a very detailed analysis. I agree with you that the use of lines is a major feature in this artwork. Different densities and directions of lines created different textures and levels of shading. These help to create a very vivid sketch of the Norwegian fjords. In addition I think the overall mood of the sketch is quite leisurely. Once again thank you for the really detailed analysis.
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Carol: Very good indeed, Chloe, and constructive comments on others' work. Very well done.
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